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wild honeysuckle's avatar

your writing is beyond just beautiful, it's deeply emotional, making grief feel a mundane object, perpetually hurting, but moving forward nonetheless

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sofi <3's avatar

stop that's so kind thank you love 😭💓

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ru ♡'s avatar

ugh ugh ugh imo definitely not redundant, thank you for this from the bottom of my heart, beautiful ❤️‍🩹

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sofi <3's avatar

thank you ru that means so much from you 😭💞

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Mar ☆'s avatar

I love this so much

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sofi <3's avatar

thank you Mar <33

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rena's avatar

this is so beautiful, wow. I don’t think it’s redundant at all !

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sofi <3's avatar

thank you you're too sweet <3

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RM Greta's avatar

This was lovely. I do relate to this.

It is interesting how much hair holds for us in identity and growing up.

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sofi <3's avatar

thank you, i feel like hair has so much cultural significance as well for brown women and other woc!

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Stephanie Oswalt's avatar

I enjoy the water motif you used, as well as the intermingling of other languages. Lovely poem, thank you for sharing your perspective.

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sofi <3's avatar

thank you Stephanie!

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